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In “Holy Sonnet 14,” John Donne would like his “three person’d God” to break instead of knock, blow instead of breathe, and burn instead of shine. This vision of redemption is about remaking rather than reform. And it seems to be motivated by a sense that neither reason nor the typical rhetoric of faith are not enough to bridge the mortal and the divine—what’s needed is God’s violent intervention. Wes & Erin discuss Donne’s surprising and paradoxical use of war and rape as metaphors for salvation. Pre-order Erin’s forthcoming book “Avail” here: http://subtextpodcast.com/avail For bonus content, become a paid subscriber at Patreon or directly on the Apple Podcasts app. Patreon subscribers also get early access to ad-free regular episodes. Also from Wes: Curtain Times, a calendar of Boston theatre, classical, talks and readings. Follow:Twitter | Facebook | Website Transcript 0:08 Wes: In Holy Sonnet 14, John Donne would like his three person God to break instead of knock, blow instead of breathe, and burn instead of shine. This vision of redemption is about remaking rather than reform. And it seems to be motivated by a sense that reason and the typical rhetoric of faith are not enough to bridge the mortal and the divine. What's needed is God's violent intervention. In this episode, we discuss Donne's surprising and paradoxical use of war and rape as metaphors for this intervention. This is Wes Alwan. 0:41 Erin: This is Erin O'Luanaigh, and you're listening to subtext. 0:49 Wes: So Erin, when he says batter my heart, is he talking about battery or is he talking about deep frying? 0:55 Erin: I think. I think it's deep frying. That seems to be the conceit that's running through this whole poem, is that he's just gotten a job at McDonald's and he wants God to save him. 1:07 Wes: Batter my heart and season it with 13 spices. I'll deliver it to you on a platter, my love. What we're getting at, I think we're reacting to the violence of the poem. The way I summarize this poem to someone who's telling about it, I just said, you know, it's kind of like he's asking God to rape him, basically. 1:30 Erin: Yeah, I think that's totally right. 1:32 Wes: So that's one way to overcome one's doubts, I guess, is to have God. 1:37 Erin: That's interesting what you say about doubt, because I'm wondering if doubt even comes into the poem. So you see this as a poem that has doubt in it. I never even considered that it's my 1:48 Wes: interpolation or the only thing really to go on. Right, is that he's betrothed to the enemy, which I take to be Satan. That's one of the questions of the poem. What is it that separates him from God? Or however you want to put it in such a way that God's being Mr. Nice Guy, right? He doesn't want the Mr. Rogers version of God breathing, shining, mending. He needs something more forceful still. The question is why? 2:13 Erin: That's interesting. I can see that reading now, being betrothed to the enemy and the enemy being Satan. I usually think that belief in Satan is the first thing to go. It's the first step on the way to unbelief if you're raised within that tradition. So the fact that he believes himself betrothed to Satan tells me that he's in thrall of sin. But it could also be doubt, too. I'M also seeing that reason is captive proves weak or untrue. So that could mean doubt as well. I didn't see that reading the fact that reason is weak or untrue, I saw as being to stand up against the sin that he feels is overwhelming him, that you wouldn't be smart enough to combat these instances of sin when they arrive, or that reason would even betray you, and that you would be using your reason to sort of justify your sinfulness. So it's betrayed you to say, even though it's supposed to be this gift from God, it's actively working against you. 3:03 Wes: I think the talk of doubt, it runs against the being betrothed to the enemy. Suggests that he believes. Right. It's just that he believes that he's caught up in the other forces. And then the rest of it's about chastity and freedom. So this has something to do with impulsiveness, his own sinfulness and impulsiveness and perhaps sexual impulsiveness and maybe aggression goes in there as well as sex and aggression. So God's metaphorical sex and aggression is the only thing that can save him from his worldly sex and aggression and impulsivity. He's asking God to become the carrier of the impulsivity that he wants to get rid of from himself. Do you want to read it before we go further? 3:42 Erin: Sure. Holy Sonnet 14. Batter My Heart 3 Personed God for you as yet but knock, breathe, shine and seek to mend, that I may rise and stand o'erthrow me and bend your force to break, blow, burn and make me new. I like an usurped town to another due, labor to admit you, but oh, to no end reason your viceroy in me me should defend, but is captived and proves weak or untrue. Yet dearly I love you and would be loved Fain but am betrothed unto your enemy. Divorce me untie or break that knot again. Take me to you, imprison me, for I, except you enthrall me, shall never be free, nor ever chaste, except you ravish me. 4:28 Wes: Very nice. So a three persons God. 4:31 Erin: Yeah, I was wondering about that to 4:34 Wes: begin with, you know, the Father, the Son and the Holy Spirit, and the three spices that go in the batter. 4:39 Erin: Yep. 4:40 Wes: Just kidding. The use of the word person there, right. Makes it more corporeal maybe than where you used to or maybe not. But it's almost like there's a hydra like effect. I think the very, you know, from the very beginning, it's kind of a surprising image. I don't know. What do you think about that? 4:56 Erin: I was thinking through this a really long time because I was just wondering why three? Why three? I mean, why emphasize the triune God here? And I noticed that the first six lines or so have that spondaic foot in the middle, so that we get three stresses in a row in the middle of the line. So it's as if there's like three, you know, three knocks that happen in the middle of each of those first lines, which gives it that really explosive kind of power. And the more I thought about that and that battering or knocking, the more I thought that, you know, if his heart is a door and they're battering it, you would need more than one person to break down a door, wouldn't you? Or you'd need more than one person to batter it down with a battering ram, I think. So he needs three people, it seems, to stand up to his sin or to stand up to Satan. Like there's a kind of strength in numbers here, maybe that's being implied. 5:43 Wes: Yeah, I mean, he is thinking the Trinity, right? It makes me wonder. So he's come up with this nice, you know, as you were saying, these three stresses in the middle. Knock, breathe, shine, and later on, break, blow, burn. And then of course there's in each case a fourth thing, which is the effect, you know, maybe the effect of the fusion of those things. So God does these different things. Knocks, breathes, shines, and then men's. And I suppose that the knock, breathe, shine, right, has to do with each different person in the three persons, God. So it makes me think about the genesis of the poem which came first. Did he come up with that nice idea of knock, breathe, shine, right? And then think, okay, let me backward engineer the first line. But anyway, whatever the case, it's rhythmically interesting. And then also. So what are knocking, breathing and shining? Knocking is politely knocking at the door to announce his presence, his existence. So that's like the first awareness of God being a child and being told there's God showing up to church early on. One's first memories of church or something like that. And then there's the other two, by 6:51 Erin: the way, for the stresses too. I'm reading that three stress from the very first line. So heart, three personed God. So I'm reading those three stresses there. And then also the triple stress on stand, o'erthrow me to batter my heart. 7:04 Wes: I mean, I'm three personed God. I'm still reading that as iambic. 7:07 Erin: So batter is reverse foot. It is Iambic pentameter. But of course, there could be variation. In fact, there should be some variation if you don't want it to be right. So batter my heart three personed God. So I'm reading my heart as an iambic foot and three personed. So three per would be a spondaic foot. So you'd have heart, three personed God. 7:29 Wes: Yeah. Okay. 7:30 Erin: And then the same in that I may rise and stand because of that caesura, o'erthrow gets a kind of. Both halves of that word get equal weight. So we have stand, o'erthrow me. That's another line that has that three in a row. 7:46 Wes: So we get three per. So that's the spondaic, unstressed soned. And then God again. And then the second line, knock, breathe, shine. Yep, all stressed. 7:57 Erin: Then rise and stand, o'erthrow me. So stand, o'erthrow. And then in the fourth line, break, blow, burn, of course. And then I think that's where we. And I, like an usurped town, to. That's where we get the change in rhythm there. So the first quatrain, I should say, I think maybe at the beginning, I thought it was the first, or said generously, was the first six lines, but it's really the first four. But I think that there are a lot of changes in rhythm that then happen or continue to happen throughout the poem. It keeps kind of shifting. And of course, the biggest tonal shift comes with the octave turning into the sestet. It's worth mentioning again that this is another combination of the Petrarchan and the Shakespearean, or the Italian and the English sonnet. So just as death be not proud, so we have A, B, B, A, A, B, B, A, C, D, C, D, E, E. So we have the traditional Petrarchan octave, and then we have the break with the sestet. But then it ends on that Shakespearean couplet to tie it all together. So back to knocking. The other thing I really see there, of course, I'm reading this really biblically. I spent a lot of time with my Bible over the past couple days reminding myself of some of these references. And of course, knocking is Christ the bridegroom knocking on the door of the bedchamber. So from the very beginning, we have a little bit of that sexual implication, right, with the church or the soul, even, like I think was traditionally conceived of as being feminine because of the fact that there was a lot of this kind of like, male female imagery in a sort of. Not in a literal sense, but in, like, a supernatural kind of sense. Just as A metaphor. And so Christ was always the bridegroom and his church, the bride in this metaphor. And so the soul was conceived of as being like, feminine for that reason that Christ is the masculine bridegroom that woos the soul is the feminine bride. So the knocking on the bedchamber is a reference to several things. There's connections to revelation there, but also to the Song of Songs, famously erotic poem in the Old Testament, which the early church fathers and most Christian traditions interpret either both as a love poem, which it is, but also as a metaphor for Christ seducing the soul, the sinner. And so that kind of gentleness. Or the bridegroom knocking on the door already has this decidedly not rapey but romantic implication from the very beginning. And a gentle knocking as you're saying 10:14 Wes: Jesus is a nice guy. 10:16 Erin: Yeah. So Jesus has a lot of different roles. 10:19 Wes: Right. 10:19 Erin: So he can also be. Mean is the wrong word. Right. Because that implies that, like, he's doing something wrong, but justly, he could be the just punisher as well, like mighty king. All these things are images of God that are baked into the Old Testament as well. So here he's being gentle, which is part of it too. 10:34 Wes: Yeah. This makes me think this is out of order, but maybe I'm just trying to read this too rigidly with lining things up with the Trinity, but knocking with Jesus and breathing with the Holy Spirit and maybe inspiration shining with the glory of God. 10:48 Erin: Yeah. I was wondering that myself, because I was like, okay, knock seems like a reference to Christ, but then shine, we have this idea that it's connected with the sun, S U N, which would then be a homophone for S O N. So maybe knock is supposed to be God the Father, but not sure. 11:04 Wes: I was thinking. Yeah. That probably each of these, you could make an argument for each of them lining up with the different parts of the Trinity. Maybe it's informative to compare them to what they're going to turn into. Breaking, blowing and burning. Knocking will become breaking down the door. Breathing, which again, to me, but you can correct me if I'm wrong, but connotes inspiration, breathing into. Probably there are other ways to read that too. Whereas blowing is no longer. Well, let's compare breathing and blowing. Breathing gets inside you. And blowing is external. It's like something internal versus external force in a way. And then shining versus burning. So shining puts light and warmth over things and there's glory in it and articulates and clarifies the world. And burning, of course, is destructive. So you get these verbs which are Associated with establishing some sort of relationship, some sort of connection between two beings, the divine and the. The mortal. And it's non destructive. And the second one is just entirely. Seems to be entirely destructive, but also external. If you're inspired, if. Right. In the first case, you can become a believer, you have a sort of internal or have faith, there would be some internal spiritual or psychological change in one's attitude. In the second case, it turns that into something seemingly, at least metaphorically external. 12:29 Erin: Mm. 12:30 Wes: You are forced. And it's no longer a matter of faith, Although it could be. Maybe that's what faith looks like under this model. Right. Something. Maybe force is the. Is the way that's the argument on the face of it. Right. Is that this nice guy stuff is not good enough. If you're really gonna get to me, I need this force. So Very, very interesting. 12:52 Erin: Yeah. I was thinking, like, blowing into somehow. But you're right, it is external. I'm thinking of Lear. The more I sat with this, being knocked around on the heath, the idea that this is external. I really like knowing Donne's upbringing in Catholicism and his relatively late conversion. So he was educated in Catholic teaching and all of that. And then even when he became an Anglican. Right. It was what we would recognize today as being like, extremely high Anglican, you know, Catholic. Catholic light. So the Catholic understanding of God's influence in our soul, of grace's influence in our soul, is something that really does. To the extent that we can say sort of metaphorically speaking or even, you know, sort of creatively speaking, that the soul has some form of physicality or some form of reality which is. You know, I'm using physicality loosely here. Right. But the extent to which it's maybe visible to God, the extent to which it's somehow present within us. You know, Catholics believe that through the sacraments, through sanctifying grace, our souls are literally changed. They're in some way evidently changed in the sight of God. So this idea of remaking one's inner self or this idea of like, a physical change being enacted on the body is actually a pretty good met…
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